Peer Review
When I finished my presentation most of the feedback I received was talking about how my voice over fit very well with what my film was about. One of my piers said that the letters could have been a bit bigger so it would be easier to read. I agree to this and plan on changing that, I also want to give my film more clips of the actors. This will increase the overall feel of of the film and make the watchers feel more in touch with them. Another piece of criticism I received was on the length of my black screen, to fix this I want to again add more clips, but I could also cut out the voice over at some parts so it gets a dark and resigned mood. My project at this point is good but not as thought out or put together as I want it. The sound in some parts is not as loud as in others. The camera quality could bb better and I need to add in more details about the actual film. Another thing my piers said was trying to lengthen the film, since at this point its only at 1:30 seconds....